Thursday, 9 August 2018

Frozen in time a new beginning

Hello in my class we have been learning to write a narrative.

My goal is to gain the readers interest.

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3 comments:

  1. Miss Baker6 September 2018 at 11:15

    Hi Taj,
    Room 5 really likes the way you wrote the word 'sweets' in fancy swirly writing. It reminded some of us of when we had our own sugar rushes and went a little crazy! We would have loved to see even more fancy writing to gain our interest as the reader.
    Thank you for sharing!
    Room 5

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  2. Anonymous30 October 2018 at 10:07

    Taj your stouy is so cool and intresting.
    Iike the detile.

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  3. Anonymous1 November 2018 at 10:02

    Joel its story not stouy

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