Rambunctious Monorail
On Tuesday afternoon at 7:00pm Dad and I went in the car to go on the
monorail at Living Springs. Once we got there I got out of the car and started to run
up the hill. Then we all stood around the carts, Mr Gray forgot the keys for
the lock. While he got the keys Miss Pownall got us to play the Don't stare game .
Once Mr Gray finally came back to unlock the lock him and my Dad heaved
the carts up. After some deciding, Paytin went first she went down with
blinding speed her hat even fell off. After some people went it was my turn, I went
Down Blitzing fast the most terrifying part was the cliff part. I looked like this
You got jolted to one side on an angle you felt like you felt like you will fall, Finally after ever one else
went it was time to go home.
Have you gone at Living Springs?
Nice job on the exciting language but maybe explaining what the "Don't stare game" is would be helpful.
ReplyDeleteHi Taj its Jayden I thought this piece of writing was awesome because of the really desciptive words,I think you could explain what the stare game was.
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