WALT: Write about a book charterer
Harry is one out of ten kids in the book WWC2 and he's the most relatable. He plays games and doesn't do homework, Harry is a 21 century kid. Hes is my favourite book charterer. His story a'int that interesting but its about him getting intimidated by his smoking teacher and dose his homework.
Have you read WWC2?
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Taj
ReplyDeleteI'm Ronan from Rawhiti School. This was really good! I like how you talked about why you liked him in an easy to understand way. Maybe next time you could check your spelling as I did find a few mistakes. But other than that I found it great!