Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 16 May 2019
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
great job Taj this is encouranging others to comment I think this a great post.
ReplyDeleteI think something more inspiaring is maybe upload an image from google of fire.cheers Jai
ReplyDeleteTaj that is a very good drawing nice message also. I really like the colour scheme spot on :). Maybe next time toggle with shapes. over all great job :) :)
ReplyDeleteits great Taj i think you could put a question at the end so it gives kids want to write a comment but other than that its really good:) ;)
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