Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 31 May 2019
9 comments:
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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I like your layout it is really it is very clear.
ReplyDeleteYou do not have to many pictures so I can see it clearly.
Maybe you could use maybe a white background so the clouds stand out a bit more. Over all well done :0 :) :)
I really like how you writ it
Deletei love your layout and how you put some photos in there to finish it off and how you are so proud of your family and friends #bcbf
ReplyDeletegood job bud 😊😀😀😁😁😁😃😃😃😄
Deletei like the coulers i can see them raely well
ReplyDeletei think it is relly cool
maybe next time you could do a few differnt coulers to it more atractive to kids : )
Thanks Brad
Deleteyour colers are very good.
ReplyDeleteI think its really good I love the coluers and like brad said maybe put more coluer
ReplyDeletei like all the things you can me proud of. but next time you could put what you have done
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