WALT: We learnt how to write a character description Here you
Monday, 1 July 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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I like your descriptive story it tells me all about you and I think you should put a video or some colour to not make it as boring but good job
ReplyDeleteI really like your descriptive story,you should put some colour in it next time and make it make more sense at the start.
ReplyDeleteI like your old man photo also the story that you write was so good
ReplyDeletebut is was for me rated 10 outa 10 amazing