Monday, 29 July 2019

Recount

W.A.L.T: Hook my audience in with a catchy start

From the warm environment of the house on a relaxing Saturday my family decided to go to MegaZone at Flipout. We went to the desk no one was there.We waited for a while. I went to go ask a Flipout worker then she said ̈Mega zone is ́ not open on weekends.¨ I went back to my family and told them,we droopily went up the stairs. Then Mum ask another worker then he said “Oh I’m just telling him to go off break.”The man working at Mega zone got us settled we put on the V.R and started … Cold Clash open the man gave us gun/control we hit each other with snowballs. The game told me how to play itself after telling us how to play. Game started we played for some time then the game finished. I won It was a fun experience

What do you do on Saturdays?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Taj,
    I really like the the detail you have put into describing our Saturday afternoon outing. The fantastic language you have used to describe the VR experience is engaging and I'm sure will encourage others to have a go. Keep up the great work, the writing you are blogging is improving each time. Perhaps a little more care with spelling might help some readers to understand your stories a little better.

    Much love,

    Mum X

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