Tuesday, 16 June 2020

Peach Crayon Here

WALT Write a persuasive writing

TAJ WE NEED TO TALK,

The Perfect Peach is here and don’t forget it (again). This has been going on for too long. When you were six I was top dog and I was used heaps but… NOW YOU NEVER USE ME! Now you sketch and...nothing... no color there might as well be a pencil crayon.That pencil says that if we worship it then maybe we will be used again. Stop using that darn pencil or we’ll all go crazy and eat it.


Your forgotten friend,
 Peach.

Would you write something back to him

1 comment:

  1. Excellent work Taj!! I'm not sure if i'd write back to a peach crayon as angry as that! Do you think that you would? If you did, what would you say?

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