It outrageous that even some people consider that all children must have pets. You might get mentally hurt, broke and physically hurt.
Firstly, Everyone knows its hard to lose someone but losing a pet can change you. The time and effort you put into making a connection with them wasted. The person who doesn´t care if you did something wrong gone. Years after their death and you still moan for them, you regret not giving them enough love and curse yourself the things you could´ve.
Secondly they cost a fortune and to look after them phew you better be rich! Now there´s a lot of this ¨This is the healthiest for your ____ and get it now¨ yeah those guys probably care for your money than your pets. Vet bills cost hundreds just for a checkup. They say a lot about insurance but sometimes you don´t even use it. From my point of view, I have a cute kitty storm, he demands food 24/7 and sometimes he dosen´t even eat it he is expensive.
Finally pets are animals and they can attack you. Dog, Cats even Hamsters can hurt you through biting, scratching and diseases these animals are born to survive with and without owners. Around 4.5 million Americans are bitten per year alone and cat kill 200 people per year. My little brother got jump at by storm.
In conclusion I believe that making all kids have pets is wrong. I´m not saying no one should have a pet it your ready for the mental challenge of losing one, the price for one and the safety of yourself. Then go get one thank for listening to me.
Do you have a pet and what type?
Wow Taj,
ReplyDeleteWhat an excellent piece of writing. You have structured it so well with the paragraphs. It is very clear and your arguments are strong.
Ka pai for an awesome effort!
Hi Taj! I am Ronan from Rawhiti School!
ReplyDeleteThat was a really great one! I loved how you put everything into an order that would make the most sense! I also liked how you specified the main negatives of being a pet owner. Maybe next time you could check over your writing and read it aloud, because I saw a few mistakes in your writing especially at the end. But other than that I thought it was great!